The text should be broken into logical paragraphs. Then, each paragraph can be rewritten to convey the same meaning but in a more concise and clear manner. Here is the revised text:
Original:
The text should be broken into logical paragraphs.
Then, each paragraph can be rewritten to convey the same meaning but in a more concise and clear manner. Here is the revised text:
Revised:
The text needs to be divided into logical paragraphs for better organization. After that, each paragraph can be rephrased to effectively communicate the same message in a more concise and clear manner.
Here is the revised version of the text.