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Today, I had a fantastic time at the beach.
The weather was perfect, and the water was so refreshing. I spent the day swimming, building sandcastles, and collecting seashells.
Later on, I enjoyed a delicious picnic with my friends, and we had a great time relaxing and soaking up the sun. I even managed to catch a beautiful sunset before heading home.
Overall, it was a wonderful day, and I can’t wait to go back to the beach again soon.